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问题描述

我花了几天时间学习 Java(我的第一语言),我只是想知道是否有更有效的方法来编写这段代码?

该程序的主要目标是计算某人的 BMI。

它询问用户他们的姓名,询问他们是否想使用公制或英制,询问测量值并提供带有小图表的答案,供用户查看它们适合的位置。

它目前工作正常,但我试图找出压缩代码并使其更高效的方法(纯粹用于学习目的)

    import java.util.Scanner; //importing the java library utilities to use the scan functions

        public class Bmi0 //declaring my intitial class and making it a public class
        {
            public static void main(String[] args) //my main method 
            {
                Scanner input = new Scanner(System.in); // starts the scanner utility to take input fromm the command line

                float height; //declaring a variable
                float weight; //declaring a variable
                float bmi; //declaring a variable
                String option; //declaring a variable
                String name; //declaration of a variable called name of type string


                System.out.printf("%nWhat is your name? ");//prompts the user for their name
                name = input.nextLine(); //reads the users input and saves it to the variable name

                System.out.printf("%nHi %s, Let's calculate you BMI %n" , name); //displays what the user 
                //typed using a %s as the place holder for the value that is in the name variable


                System.out.printf("%nUse Imperial or Metric? (Format: I or M) "); //printing to the command window and asking for input
                option = input.nextLine(); //placing the user input into the height variable

                if (option.equals ("M")) //if option is M for metric do the following
                {

                System.out.printf("%nWhat is your height in Meters? "); //printing to the command window and asking for input
                height = input.nextFloat(); //placing the user input into the height variable

                System.out.print("What is your weight in Kilos? "); //printing to the command window and asking for input
                weight = input.nextFloat(); //placing the user input into the weight variable

                bmi = (weight / (height * height)); //calculates  the conversion and stores it in the variable


                System.out.printf("%nOk %s, your BMI is: %.2f%n%n" , name, bmi); //displays the answer to 2 decimal places
                System.out.printf("BMI Categories:%n Underweight = <18.5 %n Normal weight = 18.5 - 24.9 %n Overweight = 25 - 29.9 %n Obesity = BMI of 30 or greater %n%n%n");
                }

                else if (option.equals ("I")) //if the imperial option is chosen
                {

                System.out.printf("%nWhat is your height in Inches? "); //printing to the command window and asking for input
                height = input.nextFloat(); //placing the user input into the height variable

                System.out.printf("What is your weight in Pounds? "); //printing to the command window and asking for input
                weight = input.nextFloat(); //placing the user input into the weight variable

                bmi = (weight / (height * height) * 703) ; //calculates  the conversion and stores it in the variable


                System.out.printf("%nOk %s, your BMI is: %.2f%n%n" , name, bmi); //displays the answer to 2 decimal places
                System.out.printf("BMI Categories:%n Underweight = <18.5 %n Normal weight = 18.5 - 24.9 %n Overweight = 25 - 29.9 %n Obesity = BMI of 30 or greater %n%n%n");
                }

                } //end of the method
    }//end of the class

标签: java

解决方案


一些想法:

  • 评论太多。//importing the java library utilities to use the scan functions...这并没有告诉读者任何import java.util.Scanner尚未放弃的东西。代码中的太多信息会适得其反。它使读者将时间和精力浪费在无关紧要的细节上。相反:以明确意图的方式编写代码,而不需要大量注释。
  • 格式:遵循标准的 java 编码风格指南。喜欢:例如,将开口保持{在 if 条件的行上。不要大括号后添加另一个空行。相反,将新块缩进2 或 4 个空格。目前一种非常著名的方法是来自google的方法。

您的代码对于新手来说是“好的”,但正如所说:大多数评论都可能被丢弃,这将提高可读性。下一个改进是将不同的“方面”放入较小的辅助方法中,以避免将所有内容都放在一个冗长的主要方法中。


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